Please rate the musical content of this song..!

[onqel]

Hi guys

I have started a band with three other guys and I'm making some "demo"-songs to help us get started..

This is a very rough mix of the things we have agreed on so far.. sort of..

I need some musical critiques because the drummer is afraid that we're gonna end up sounding like every other band out there..(hard to avoid within this genre)


Here it is so far.. Intro -> very short verse -> pre-chorus -> chorus

http://www.theserinaexperiment.net/nervousband/nervous1.mp3


Thank you for your time

-John

 

[lekteri]

Instant In Flames

 

[onqel]

damn

 

[paladin shredder]

i could totally hear some emo-core lyrics over this, hawthorne heights meets killswitch engaged. not sure if thats what you guys are going for.