Post SOngs You Wrote

[Blackwater Demon]

Anyone got any? Here isone I wrote a long time ago. Its not much but itsok.

Mystic woman do your daance
Mystic woman put me in your trance
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

Mystic woman tell me your thoughts
mystic woman show me your sould
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

Mystic woman do your daance
Mystic woman put me in your trance
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

 

[Kenneth R.]

um

 

[Sisyphus's Struggle]

it's a mantra??

 

[opeth_353]

Shaomone.

 

[Sisyphus's Struggle]

Shaomone.

What's that?? :S

 

[soundave]

Something Michael Jackson says?

 

[Lothlorien]

so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

.......is there some country where the english word for "and" is spelled "ang"?

 

[Mr. Bland]

Wow... gayest thing I've ever read. OMG. uke:

 

[Vega Skater]

OOOOOOH I HAVE FEAR OF SKELETON

 

[Katatonic89]

Anyone got any? Here isone I wrote a long time ago. Its not much but itsok.

Mystic woman do your daance
Mystic woman put me in your trance
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

Mystic woman tell me your thoughts
mystic woman show me your sould
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

Mystic woman do your daance
Mystic woman put me in your trance
you're a mystic woman in a mystic world
words cant tell you what you mean to me
so come on mystic woman ang get mystic with me

wow... that's... just... bad...

 

[TheWickerMan]

There's an over-usage of the word 'mystic', don't you think?

And basically you repeat the same thing 3 times (with minor variations in the 1st and 2nd line).

 

[tchocky]

wow... that's... just... bad...

You can say that again. No offence, but those lyrics are fucking atrocious.

 

[NicholasDWolfwood]

shut thread

 

[Sisyphus's Struggle]

i'd probably post one, but they are all in another language from another dimension...

 

[Koi]

that's not the kind of lyric you post in an opeth forum, but that would probably work for james brown or something

 

[Sisyphus's Struggle]

for hendrix!!!

 

[Metalstrm]

Actually yes, something like that would really work for a Hendrixy song. Reminds me of "Foxy Lady". But there's way too much "mystic".

 

[Metalstrm]

Here is one I had written, called Passing Away:

Passing Away


Too painful to bear,
Words cannot describe,
The tearing,
Of my soul.

All for nothing,
My thoughts beguiled,
The flattery of darkness,
A sinful pride.

Austere surroundings,
Footsteps of death,
Memories too broken,
Chaos triumphant.

A smiling priest,
Plays with his cross,
Mumbling a litany,
For an irredeemable soul,
To a God perverse,
Who leads us to defeat.

The end is nigh,
Heart pounding slowly,
As He welcomes,
A passing away.

 

[Carta's]

This is a 3 parts song I wrote for my Deceptive Appearances project, kind of cheesy lyrics, but here they are nevertheless

Of Ice and of Dreams [Part I]

Ice
Falling from your hair
Dreams
Of isolation and despair
Confusing sight
Cold ashes on the brazier
Once were so warm
Now cold
As the ice
Covering your skin
As the pain
Creeping in your dreams

[Part II]

Cold is the sweat rolling down in her eyes
Snowflakes are falling around her pale cheeks
Did you long for this to happen?
Did you care for what's been lost?
Sharp are the memories piercing your mind
Sharp was the blade that cut trough your heart
What will you do when she fails
To breathe

Beneath the plumbeous sky
He snowflakes fall
I can feel the agony
I can feel the wailing of the earth
As if joy itself were pried form this world

Will you ever see the smile on her face?
Will you ever see the love in her eyes?
Will you ever feel the warmth of her mouth?
Will you ever breath the same breath as her?
Will she ever leave her bloodstained resting place?
Will she ever pass the recoil of death?
Will she ever long for the passions of life?
Will she ever have another chance?

[Part III]

Of ice and of dreams are made our hope
Nothing but failure over the edge

 

[philno]

Darkferret please open up for me,
as I am currently pulling my pants down with glee,
how unfortunate of you,
but remember it's my cock that will smell like your poo.