Proggy Black Metal (ish) Song ideas

[MAXMEDLOW]

hey guys, i won't blabber on for ages, just wanted to know if any of you guys have any ideas on how to improve the mix here. the acoustic intro finishes at about 30 seconds in if you feel the need to skip through it...

http://soundcloud.com/maxmedlow/idea-1-for-e-p

 

[morten.nu]

The intro is actually quite nice, though I'd delete the short drum bit. I think the track is really cool. Needs an outro though.