RENOB NEVADA COVER!

man im not talking now about the sound itself..
your mix dosent have THE vibe this song has - the tight and power with the stops.. thats the goal you need to reach imo
the mix allso realy muddy and the insturments dosent have enough power

the kick sound realy realy boxy
 
Okay.
I really don't like it at all.
Its all fucking wrong and its destroying me.
I've spent too much time on it.
And I'm starting to think I actually screamed it wrong, which I did.
Fuck, Fuck, Fuck, FUCK.

The verb is wrong.
The reverse fade is wrong.

But I can't keep doing it because I'll end up staying up all night trying to get it right when it will end up wrong and I'm already tired as fuck and need sleep.


Here is Two versions.
One has the GO a little loud.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Vocalswav.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Vocalswavlouder.mp3


And Both raw vocals.
Maybe someone can make them sound decent.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Raw Vox2.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Raw Vox.mp3

Don't dig it at all.

Maybe give a shot at doing it again tomorrow with fresh ears.
Band practice today raped me.
 
Okay.
I really don't like it at all.
Its all fucking wrong and its destroying me.
I've spent too much time on it.
And I'm starting to think I actually screamed it wrong, which I did.
Fuck, Fuck, Fuck, FUCK.

The verb is wrong.
The reverse fade is wrong.

But I can't keep doing it because I'll end up staying up all night trying to get it right when it will end up wrong and I'm already tired as fuck and need sleep.


Here is Two versions.
One has the GO a little loud.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Vocalswav.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Vocalswavlouder.mp3


And Both raw vocals.
Maybe someone can make them sound decent.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Raw Vox2.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5012299/Renob Nevada Shit Raw Vox.mp3

Don't dig it at all.

Maybe give a shot at doing it again tomorrow with fresh ears.
Band practice today raped me.

The second one sounds decent, just pull back the reverse a tiny bit, and i think you'll enjoy it more :)
 
man im not talking now about the sound itself..
your mix dosent have THE vibe this song has - the tight and power with the stops.. thats the goal you need to reach imo
the mix allso realy muddy and the insturments dosent have enough power

the kick sound realy realy boxy

"...the synths REALLY make this breakdown."

I see what you mean, though. But as for the stops on the guitar, they're almost 100% perfect, imo.

But i can somewhat agree with the mud, because i tried to force a lot of bass into this mix.
 
Your guitars are too crunchy, imo. They need a smoother presence.
Also, the synth would REALLY help.
Drum parts are wrong.
Needs more present cymbals with A LOT more room.

Less bass, too. Or at least EQ out some of the muddiness

Also, the depth just isn't there.