yeh the first one was 'softly' about 3 months ago now.
right, your song just finished downloading, time for a listen
a nice, interesting first riff, some cool nonstandard chord shapes, not a big fan of the guitar sound though, actually if you added tonnes of reverb on to the start itd sound cool!
then the hihat on the drums first comes in (1:19), this bit is pretty good.. the advice i can give here is that you could making your picking a bit more interesting, the sound your creating is cool and different, but then your playing these things in basic 8th notes, if you added a few quick little trills or hammerons and stuff it could make the world of difference, and maybe a triplet here or there, stuff like that. something to think about anyway.
at about 2:54 you start using some cool harmonisations it sounds reallly cool, as already stated by entropy - its a pity the drums werent more powerful to add to the sound.
the rest of the song sounds really cool as well, more cool harmonisations and stuff, over a hypnotising acoustic riff.
obviously the song isnt finished, but it also didnt seem completely appropriate to drop into that final riff where you did, it just seemed to happen a bit to suddenly or something, that could just be me though!! It also could jsut be something to do with drums. I mean it might be something as easy as holding those notes a bit longer before droping into the faster bit.
this song is really good, i love how its structured so far and the sounds youve recorded work well. Good stuff
how long have you been writing/recording?
