How do the overall do in this short clip? Im trying to figure some good sound that i could record a demo song soon 
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/noesthumano2.mp3 (made some adjustments and started to do the thing with this sound now)

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7606286/noesthumano2.mp3 (made some adjustments and started to do the thing with this sound now)