Short Mix Snippet Need Crit!

[fenders]

hey guys, please help me out here, is this good? bad? what can i work on to have a more pro sound? any comment would be muuuch appreciated

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2255790/Jan. 2010/Mix Test bass mod layerrr(masturd).mp3

btw, guitars are
left TSE x30
right ts+8505
s2.0 for drums