Something Opeth inspired....

Dang joe you took the words right out of my mouth... the contrast of the white to the dark does help even though it does look unfinished. The only thing i see is that it does look pretty busy.. makes the image a little too confusing. All the black outlines to the smoke looking stuff is the main problem. Cool and good work, but if you can fix those in someway, it could be top notch.
 
Pretty damn good, I wish I could draw/do art, something I've never been able to do and it always amazes me how people come up with drawings such as that.

I think it looks good sort of unfinished like that.