Stratolike Power Metal (Need feedback)

[pitoga]

Greetings
This time it's the same band but with a composition of they’re own.
I'm pretty tired and want to go to sleep but my last checking was that the rhythm guitar was way too low.
In general I’m not at all happy with the mix it's way to "busy" i isn't very clear, any suggestions? I am assuming one of the main reasons everything is kind of busy is because of the not so tight playing, but anyways any suggestion appreciated.



http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3530360/Despertar.mp3


update----some changes----
(ritm guit a bit higher, changed strings part and minor adjustments)
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3530360/Despertar version 2.mp3

 

[Masticore]

I like it! I dont listen to strat. at all, but to other power metalz, Production wise it sounds good to me. Not a big fan of the same same vox, but he executed it well. Leads sound fantastic, all playing is pretty tite. I like teh keyboards, reminds me of Tony Macalpine type runs and phrasing, not to mention the tone. I would give this a 8/10 from me! All in all a great mix, great song, great playing! I want to hear more

 

[zakky]

i like it nice job! check your pm

 

[pitoga]

Well here is a second version of the song, changed some stuff hope it's any better now.

Please any feedback would be awesome.

THNX

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3530360/Despertar version 2.mp3

 

[paladin shredder]

i would turn up the rhythm guitars, everything else sounds good.

edit: never mind, just saw the update link.

but there needs to be something on the last measures of the intro parts once the weedly-deedly part stops (from 0:21-0:24), like some extra synth part or orchestra hits or something. also, perhaps more reverb on the drums.

 

[pitoga]

Were you listening to the first version or the second? Cause in the second version I did that, do you think I should do it even more?