Stupid generic metalcore chugga chugga band I recorded (advice much appreciated)

[sander]

http://soundcloud.com/sanderrrr/your-trial-print2-wip/s-v1P5c


Although most of you guys probably agree that this song is uke: , i desperately need advice on this mix

It's still very work in progress,


Work in progress.
*No lead guitar as of yet
*No mastering
*Might clip at some parts
*There is a small click during the last breakdown that shouldn't be there
*The drums are programmed and I haven't humanized them (yet)
and soundcloud might or might have not butchered the quality.


The guitars are ultra edited, since the dudes in the band couldn't play their instruments to save their lives.

Anyway, my ears are tired and i'm not sure if there's too much low end and if the kick and snare are too loud. Even though I was OK with the guitar tone I'm not sure if it works anymore.


Either way, any kind of advice is much appreciated.

 

[nynejoe]

Drums sure need automation and humanizing, thats biggest distraction for me. Good mix, guitar could have a tiny bit more bottom and bit more clarity for me. But then again, I don't listen to much music like this. Snare might be a smidgen too loud. Kick seems ok on my speakers. But I have shitty speakers.

 

[corymg]

can you ask them how many minutes it took to write that song