Thoughts on this mix?

[mts1979]

Hey...so I posted this on the main forum, and didn't get much feedback except one guy who said "Hey it sounds great!" (thanks, that guy!!)

But I'm looking for some constructive criticism with this. There's things I might change about it, and I'm curious if it's just me or if it's something that might stand out to someone else as well. Or maybe one of you guys will notice something I didn't.

hear it here:
http://www.myspace.com/trials
(it's the top track, "declaration")

Sorry that it's only on MySpace...I'd put it on the FTP but I can't.

mark
TRIALS

 

[panzerfaust666]

Not bad dude,sounds pretty good actually

 

[Djabthrash]

Kick is a bit too clicky for me.

Anyway it sounds very good but unless i'm mistaken the mix is a bit different than on the "powerless" track right ? If such is the case i prefer the mix on the "powerless" track (which was almost perfect, but lacked some bass bit IMO).

To me drums sound better on the "powerless" track, but the rest (=bass+guitars) sound bigger and fuller on the "declaration track". If i were you i would keep the drum mix i had on the "powerless" track.

The clean vocals chorus sounds a lot like recent Machine Head clean vocals parts.