Thrash tone test/help

[elapidae1]

Ok here is a very sloppy (just slapped it together) tone test. Im after a heavy thrash sound kind of like testament/exodus.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41875324/Parasite1.mp3

(UPDATED)

Any help will be great.

P.S. this has no processing (as you can tell)

Chain is : Hellraiser V, Hardwire CM-2, Blackstar HT-5, LeCab2/impulse.

 

[elapidae1]

no opinions?

 

[Ascendant]

The question is, does it work in a mix? That said the tone does sound a tad scooped in the mids.

Also if you could upload something smaller like an OGG or MP3 the next time, one that doesn't take an eon to download for most people. Contrary to popular belief, even with a fast internet wav files can take some time to download, especially from hosts that choke their uprate. Anyway some people usually don't even bother downloading wavs, or at least that's the impression I've gotten here.

 

[elapidae1]

ok sorry. so you think it needs more mids for a start?

 

[elapidae1]

New link MP3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/41875324/Parasite.mp3

 

[elapidae1]

Updated

 

[elapidae1]

Anyone?