"Transistors Waltz" New song.... need some opinions

[Iamsparrow]

Right now I've only gotten to the guitars drums and keys. Its a rough start and I dont want get carried away with the eq.

Anyways, here it is..

NEW with Bass.
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/907410/Transistors Waltz bass.mp3

Old
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/907410/Deformed complete test 2 fade.mp3

 

[Plankis]

Cool melodies. Though I think that synth could be a db or 2 quieter. Also bass please.

 

[tronix87]

some nice parts, good guitars.
for my liking the snare a little to loud.. maybe 1db down

 

[Iamsparrow]

Thanks Ill fuss with the leveling and hopefully get in some bass tomorrow.

Ill post an update soon.

 

[Iamsparrow]

Ok I just Posted the updated version with bass.

I think the synth is still too loud but Im having a hell of a time getting the right levels.

Just need opinions at this point

Thanks Much