VOCAL attempt ......

I cant believe how fucking hard it is to do vocals and then try and sit them in a mix!
Does the vocal sound corny or slightly gay? What would you do to try and correct it? And those fucking plosives .... aarrgghhhhh! HOW DO FUCK OFF?

Just 1 riff with a beat, just a raw product, nothing special, trying to get better at this vocal stuff.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/822065/Audio Files/vox.wav