Whats missing from this ?

[G1]

Sample Clip


Still in the process of writing this into a full song but somethings bugging me.

The first riff is powerfull, the part after is the build up into the first riff again.

But it only seems to be hitting 80% of how potentially powerfull it could be.

any help would be awesome !

 

[ahjteam]

there isn't enough variation, try adding a distinct lead melody