What do you guys reckon? I've just sat down today and spent a few hours fucking with it from scratch etc.
Let me know what you think! What you like, what you think needs changing etc!
Cheers folks!
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 15:12 - Tightened it up and got rid of some of the noise etc.
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 16:29 - Made it fatter but more focused and added vocals.
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 16:56 - Changed intro effects and added mini sub drop.
*UPDATE* 21/07/2013 @ 14:35 - More changes to the distortion and meat of the bass.
*UPDATE* 21/07/2013 @ 18:21 - Added vocals and new riffs
*UPDATE* 22/07/2013 @ 15:08 - Reworked riffs, added new vocals (clean vocals too!)
*UPDATE* 22/07/2013 @ 17:02 - Reworked riffs, added some Shuggah
As the sun lay upon his skin,
His eyes closed, looking within,
The wind shows a warmer scene,
And the man begins to soar,
In the passing light,
The wind beneath his mind,
He flies above the cell,
Devoid of all his strain,
The end, is just a game to him,
For fear of losing all has never crossed his mind,
In the shadow of the man who kept you inside all these years is,
Light,
You will find all that you seek if you just look out,
Let me know what you think! What you like, what you think needs changing etc!
Cheers folks!
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 15:12 - Tightened it up and got rid of some of the noise etc.
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 16:29 - Made it fatter but more focused and added vocals.
*UPDATE* 20/07/2013 @ 16:56 - Changed intro effects and added mini sub drop.
*UPDATE* 21/07/2013 @ 14:35 - More changes to the distortion and meat of the bass.
*UPDATE* 21/07/2013 @ 18:21 - Added vocals and new riffs
*UPDATE* 22/07/2013 @ 15:08 - Reworked riffs, added new vocals (clean vocals too!)
*UPDATE* 22/07/2013 @ 17:02 - Reworked riffs, added some Shuggah
As the sun lay upon his skin,
His eyes closed, looking within,
The wind shows a warmer scene,
And the man begins to soar,
In the passing light,
The wind beneath his mind,
He flies above the cell,
Devoid of all his strain,
The end, is just a game to him,
For fear of losing all has never crossed his mind,
In the shadow of the man who kept you inside all these years is,
Light,
You will find all that you seek if you just look out,
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