Would someone listen to this and give me an opinion!!!

[doclegion]

Its just me messing around with some riffs on my new guitar and programs nothing special just looking for some suggestions anything to get it to sound better in anyway thanks

http://www.soundupload.com/pop_audio.php?key=cijzzr5pgxcs28sg

I got other stuff just havent posted any awesome

 

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I'd say at least dual track the rhythm guitars, and maybe lower the gain a little bit? Hard to say with just one guitar how the tone is.

 

[doclegion]

It is dual tracked with seperate recordings Track R track L still gotta throw some bass down

 

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Gotcha. In that case, pan em out to the sides.

 

[grywolf627]

And pan the drums as well, please. The whole mix is in mono.

 

[doclegion]

LOL everything is panned guitars are 1 track hard right 1 track hard left never panned drums really it throws me off when im listening to a cymbal thats loud in one side For drums what should i pan out? Hi Hat? and a crash

 

[doclegion]

The drums are panned as well i just checked it out lol What the hell is going on???

 

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You must have mixed the wav down in mono or something went wrong with the host. Try it again.

As for drums, pan the cymbals and toms out a good amount. The toms should kind of roll across the stereo field from L to R or R to L.