Yet another idea for you to check out!

[Humidfume]

Hey!

I'm gonna dump the clean section at the end, other than that. Thoughts?




Rise of men,
They tend the embers we've forgotten,
They turn the martyrs to denial,
And send their wrath,

Progress,
We climb the mountains eye,

We are not the ones
We are not the ones (Descend),
We are not the ones (Resent),
We are not the ones (Decide),

Reason listen to the treason,
I beg of you this day,
Just listen, listen,

Reason listen to the treason (look what we have done),
Reason listen to the trees son (look what we have done),
Listen to the treason,

Goddamn,

We are immortal,
The coming plague,
Facing the human lie,
Accepting of its wake,

 

[WalhallaM]

Nice,it have some Strapping young lad vibe,why you want to dump last part it's good (maybe just a little different drumming approach ,fill between heavy and clean, more variation on drums) .Nevertheless good tune,I like it.

 

[Humidfume]

Nice,it have some Strapping young lad vibe,why you want to dump last part it's good (maybe just a little different drumming approach ,fill between heavy and clean, more variation on drums) .Nevertheless good tune,I like it.

Thanks man!

Just not feeling the clean section tbh.. updated it to a more thrash style vibe now!