Your opinion about my recording? (DeathMetal)

[Ravaging Dragon]

Hi, just wanted to put up another record.

I have a new technique now, and also used a bit reverb.
I recorded the whole thing with a Shure SM 58 directly into my PC.

I hope there will be many opinions and ideas what to make better

http://www.soundclick.com/updateband/SongInfo.cfm?BandID=243538&Updated=1687618

 

[Ravaging Dragon]

OKay, i just found out you have to be registered to hear the file. you could tell me this...

http://server5.uploadit.org/files/RavagingDragon-B1.mp3.jpg
http://server5.uploadit.org/files/RavagingDragon-B2.mp3.jpg
http://server5.uploadit.org/files/RavagingDragon-B3.mp3.jpg
http://server5.uploadit.org/files/RavagingDragon-B4.mp3.jpg


at first, you have to remove the jpg extension and then put it in order in you playlist

would be nice, if someone would do this little work and listen to it .... ^^

 

[Moloch]

fix those links please, the url for that link it the same as the title..
http://server5.uploadit.org/files/R...agon-B4.mp3.jpg

 

[Ravaging Dragon]

OKay, they're fixed now

 

[Moloch]

Actually you leave the jpg extention. This is using winamp 5.03, hitting the plus on the playlist, and choosing add url.
Turn the music up.. your vocals are too loud.
IMO, you need to work on getting the vocals a little more refined.. sounds like the dude from dying fetus.. cant understand a word he says..
I prefer Mikael from Opeth.. his vocals are atleast usally understandable.
But uh.. dont worry about it.. you'll get better

 

[Ravaging Dragon]

Okay thanks, so much to my articulation. But what do you guys think about the sound of the voice, and more important:
What tips do you have for me

 

[Moloch]

Okay thanks, so much to my articulation. But what do you guys think about the sound of the voice, and more important:
What tips do you have for me

The sound is a bit too rough for me, I prefer a more refined growl.
Just try to sound like mikael from opeth and Ill like it

 

[Ravaging Dragon]

Of course, I will do my very best, that YOU will like it ^^

No, serious, I also like a more refined sound...
I think I will check out some Opeth songs...