A dark mood song (not metal at all)

[whitedamp]

CO - Monsters (Preview)

Yeah, I know, this song does not have any guitar and the tempo is 80, but I guess that this forum is pretty open minded so... any sugestions? I used to write many songs like this when I didn´t had a guitar nor e-drums.

 

[KeithRT99]

link doesnt work

 

[whitedamp]

Oh, it works here. Try again today, It´s on Gavin´s FTP.