Absolutely completely not metal at all

[lanky noob]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71178437/Cristina vane first master wav.wav

Figured i'd try and build a portfolio of stuff that isn't completely metal

Any thoughts? if i'm honest it's the mix i'm most proud of so far

Any criticism is appreciated! especially on the vocals...

EDIT2: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/71178437/Cristina vane master 3 .wav

Any improvement?

 

[lanky noob]

Sorry about the double post but chrome's spazzing out and won't let me edit:

Listening back in the morning, the vocals really are flat and lifeless but I have no idea what I can do to them, 'cause boosting the top end even half a db brings in a shitload of sibilance

HELP MEEE

 

[Vicioushead]

I can't get the file to play.

 

[lanky noob]

I had the same issue, just my dropbox being a prick, give it a bit longer than you would normally and it should be fine

 

[lanky noob]

updated original post with another attempt/replaced first link, should all be working fine now

rip me a new one guys!

 

[xXxMetalJunkiexXx]

Hey dude! Nice mix. I'd stick to the first attempt and try this:
Even though you said it brings shitloads of sibilance, I'd try high shelfing above 6-7K about 2-3db. Just see what works best for you, small adjustments sometimes make a huge difference. You can also try a band boost at around 15k to give the vocals some air. Oh and put a de-esser after the EQ in the chain, this will cut off some annoying highs. Good luck

 

[lanky noob]

bump, updated OP with improved first mix

any feedback?