Art Thread

Here´s some of my stuff again. It´s from a photobook called "decay" I did . Photos were taken in an old empty factory building in my hometown.

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There are some more, but this shall be enough.
 
It's basically the way the letters cram together in the middle, it's like the "of" was put in after-the-fact, moving over the "the", and ignoring to adjust for spacing; and yeah I'm sure the yellow isn't helping either.

Making the "of the" a smaller font and stop trying to make it align at the top would probably do the trick.