Bash my mix.

[benjy]

Hey dudes, here is a mix I've been working on for a while. This thing needs to be iTunes ready in a couple of weeks so let me know what you think what could be improved etc... Thanks!
https://www.dropbox.com/s/nmx22sibf4d0u7w/goodbye full mix.mp3

 

[Kellii]

Vocals sound very dry and upfront. I think a little bit of subtle reverb on them, maybe some backing screams would help too and a little bit of panning in the vocals every so often to keep it interesting /create excitement.

For instance the " I want you, I need you" bit ( I think it says) around 0:50 You could pan the first line left then the second right and so on in that verse till about 1:00 and have them go centred again.

I really like the instruments though a lot of cool instrumentation going on and the screaming itself is good.

 

[benjy]

Thanks a ton dude! I'll work on it and post a new mix soon.

 

[benjy]

Alright, I worked on the vocals some more. I added some different Verb and EQ'd a but differently. I haven't received results I like with panning on the vocals as of yet but I'm still messing with that. Threw a quick master on it. What do you think.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4aezrtq1lo4vub6/Goodbye Mastered.mp3

 

[benjy]

Bump.