Black Metal/Hardcore/Crust mix (advice)

[ulverine]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1261919/cara neir 10-10-10 song 6.mp3

I would like some feedback and fresh ears on this mix. Musically and production-wise, the aim is a blend of BM and Hardcore/Crust among other influences. Obviously it's missing vocals, but that will be recorded later. I don't necessarily want polish, I just want balance and a low end presence.

With that in mind, the low end is something that I'm unsure of and would like others' opinions on; I don't have a great monitoring environment so I try to compensate as best as I can with my Dell speakers/sub, AKG K240M phones, and repeated car-listens.

Thanks for your time.

 

[zver]

nice mix! i like it.but you can work on the cymbals i think they are much back

 

[ulverine]

Thanks! I was wondering about the level of the cymbals. I'll keep that in mind when I tweak the mix once the vocals are in.

 

[ulverine]

Any other advice or feedback?