Comments and help plz

[Jeds7800]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4839006/Fluorescent Decadence2.mp3

Just want some general tips on this and also want to know if there's anything annoying or distracting.

 

[Sora01]

The mix sounds pretty thin, i think the song writing is interesting. but damn those vocals...wow...I mean...Is it meant to be that out of tune?????

The guitars could do with a bit more thickness

 

[cloy26]

What did you low pass the guitars at?

 

[Jeds7800]

What did you low pass the guitars at?

Probably 10k or so. Do you mean highpass? Cause I took out a lot of bass.

but damn those vocals...wow...I mean...Is it meant to be that out of tune?????

I'm pretty confused over the vocals. They're really weird obviously. =/

The guitars could do with a bit more thickness. The mix sounds pretty thin.

Aighty.

 

[Mago]

i like the first riff...
and +1 to eveything sora said.

 

[cloy26]

Probably 10k or so. Do you mean highpass? Cause I took out a lot of bass.

lol. yes. sorry

Idk if I like the tone being so high passed...

 

[rfahey86]

I think the guitars definitely need some more low end to give them some power.

 

[Jeds7800]

Updated slightly. Are the vocals any better?

 

[digitalmikey]

I actually dig the vocals. They are interesting.

 

[AerialThesis]

did you use any stereo enhancer? cause the mix seems really odly panned

 

[Jeds7800]

I actually dig the vocals. They are interesting.

Cool, I think he's just got a weird style for this one, but I like it.

did you use any stereo enhancer? cause the mix seems really odly panned

Nope, but I changed up a lot of panning later on in the song (too much?). For the most part though, two gtars 100% left/right, bass middle, snare middle, cymbals are default slate panning I think.

Thanks for all the help, though, guys.