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[Jasonmadeco]

Here's my shot at it! I would REALLY APPRECIATE FEEDBACK ON THIS!
has the vocals too!!!

 

[Bay Studio]

Here's my take, whipped up in a couple hours of free time so some things are a little off... snare is too papery, guitars are a little loud, lead part is a tiny bit off, ugh. I'll fix that in a bit

It might be my taste, and i´m not asking in a stupid way, but why do you have your drums so "wet"? The kick barely has any body/sub to it.
The guitars sound pretty good except for some low mids going on (ampsim, right?).

 

[marios.blythe]

Great mix dude!can u share the vocal chain?i like the distortion :-D

 

[mickrich]

Thanks CalumJC for uploading and Marios for the vocals.
Decided to do some re-amping practice with this.
MIDI bass wasn't working so I quickly recorded a bass for it.
Not perfect but much easier to mix than the MIDI.
Here is a WAV of bass track if anyone wants it.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/2133088/CalumJC_bass.wav

Used ts808>Triple Rectifier>Recto Cab>Beyer M201>ISA828 for guitars.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/2133088/CalumJC.mp3

 

[Jasonmadeco]

Great mix dude!can u share the vocal chain?i like the distortion :-D

Hey, Thanks man! I appreciate it!!

The vocal chain are as follows; DeEsser>Vocal Rider>Q6>Decapitator(Tape Saturation)<-the distortion]>CLA-2A>CLA-76>Spacedsn(plate verb)>Echo>L1 Limiter pushed at a -12 attenuation.

The screams were great, but there was one clean vocal phrase I didn't really like so I cut it out.. sorry

 

[KyrtVampir]

My variant https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93660918/3.mp3

 

[Jasonmadeco]

My variant https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/93660918/3.mp3

Wow sweeet mix!!!! I love the vocals! and the punch of the mix!!

 

[KyrtVampir]

Wow sweeet mix!!!! I love the vocals! and the punch of the mix!!

Thank you

 

[Habsburgs]

quick mix no vocls yet :\

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1159812/CJ Focus Master1.mp3

 

[KeNeJ1991]

This is my variant: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/151538023/так4.mp3

 

[marios.blythe]

This is my variant: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/151538023/так4.mp3

what is your bass chain man? incredible bass tone
but i don't like the mix..i think that have lots of low end..

 

[Tommy Evans]

My attempt! No leads yet but diggin it so far nonetheless. Any thoughts?
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/52578704/Focus UMF2.mp3

 

[callumstokes]

Gonna have a crack at this! Sounds tight.

 

[KyrtVampir]

what is your bass chain man? incredible bass tone
but i don't like the mix..i think that have lots of low end..

http://texasgrind.bigcartel.com/product/texas-grind-alchemist-exclusive-pack

 

[SafeHouse]

Hey everyone,

I did a mix of the song (including marios.blythe vocals)
Spent ~1.5hrs on it. This is the result.

Would love some feedback...
...Or if anyone has any questions about it. Feel free to ask.

Cheers,
SafeHouse

 

[FrankTheSmith]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j3h10WZc9K0

 

[marios.blythe]

Hey everyone,

I did a mix of the song (including marios.blythe vocals)
Spent ~1.5hrs on it. This is the result.

Would love some feedback...
...Or if anyone has any questions about it. Feel free to ask.

Cheers,
SafeHouse

i listen to it with headphones...BRUTAL!

 

[Klosure]

Hey there....


Spent about 45 mins on this:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/880876/focus mix.mp3

 

[Klosure]

a slightly more tamed version

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/880876/focus 7.mp3

 

[SafeHouse]

i listen to it with headphones...BRUTAL!

Haha thanks mate. Brutz is what I was aiming for :hotjump: