Critiques anybody?

[viewerfromnihil]

www.soundclick.com/dillonbanis

somethin i threw together the other day, i normally write heavier stuff, but i was in a black metal mood

 

[OvSeth]

You already posted it in the other thread, yet you make another one for it.

 

[Knarfi]

Genre: Metal : Death/Black Metal

NOITSNOT

but its quite okay, not my thing. just dont call it bm

 

[Bodominarvoitus]

Genre: Metal : Death/Black Metal

NOITSNOT

but its quite okay, not my thing. just dont call it bm

+1

Listened to it when I was at my dad's, but couldn't respond, as I had to paint the fucking garage : /

 

[The Emptier]

ummmm i thought it was more black then death

 

[Knarfi]

ummmm i thought it was more black then death

lol. then you dont know what bm is

 

[The Emptier]

im well aware what it is, and i thought the song had more black metal then death

 

[Knarfi]

im well aware what it is, and i thought the song had more black metal then death

lol. then you dont know what bm is

srsly man its not bm at all, maybe the guitars lean a bit towards it but thats all

 

[viewerfromnihil]

srsly man its not bm at all, maybe the guitars lean a bit towards it but thats all

yeah, it's not really BM. it's just has some BM influences. which is really just the one riff with the minor chords

 

[viewerfromnihil]

You already posted it in the other thread, yet you make another one for it.

i added drums to it

 

[OvSeth]

Well that sounded good, to be honest. Nice job!

 

[viewerfromnihil]

thanks man

 

[Fetzer]

blah

 

[viewerfromnihil]

i've been playing guitar for 3.5 years and i've been doing vocals for 1 year

 

[marfal66]

What programs do you use?
The drums sound bad in my opinion, some cymbals are completely left (hi-hat) or rightpanned which is pretty disturbing to me. Also I can't hear any of the other drums, only the snare a bit. You should work on that.

 

[viewerfromnihil]

it was my first try and it's actually a great drum program... beatcraft

 

[marfal66]

No offence dude, I was just giving advice.
I'm not happy with my drumsound either.

 

[viewerfromnihil]

i didn't take any offense, it's cool. i knew the double bass was too quiet. i'll make sure i fix it next time

 

[K_A]

The double bass is IMHO a bit too dominant in the drum there, too fast and too much. It kinda loses some of it's effect if you just pedal 600bpm through the whole song. Also any drums made with a program does sound a bit artificial, coz it all sounds exactly the same but that can't really be fixed unless you get a good drummer instead. Also some bass wouldn't be bad. If not as a bass bass, try to add some bass to the guitarsound itself...?

 

[viewerfromnihil]

i'm tuned to B and i don't have a thick enough bass string to handle that