Crits on my new mix

[Daybreak]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/61928205/Draw The Line Mix Test 4.mp3

Beginning to feel kind of finished. Anything you guys think needs improvement?

 

[EnjoiTrent]

Sounds like the vocals could use more compression, otherwise it sounds good to me. Maybe brighten the vocals up presence wise.

 

[GearMan2point0]

the low octave in the cleans could be lowered in a volume a tad.......

 

[tmitchell33]

Sounding good! I would say a few things; the whole mix is lacking in 500 - 900Hz it's really scooped - no body - this will most likely make it unstable on some systems. Also the guitars are a little brittle for my taste. As some of the other guys mentioned, the vocal production needs a little work - especially the delays and effects. The bottom end seems well controlled and the composition is strong - keep up the good work!

 

[benjy]

Not bad. I dig the feel. I'd agree on the scooped mix kinda of lacking in beefiness. Vocals could use work besides that rad. Also maybe bring the snare up a tad.

 

[Soundscaper11]

I think it needs more cowbell