Drumsound + Bass // Am I on the right way?

Drums sound fake, but I guess that's probably what you're after?

Overhead levels - sound alright actually. I try to match the bass guitar with my cymbals.
Also, perhaps use a multiband on the bass to even out the notes.

Not too bad,.. would like to hear more of the track!
my two pence.
 
I don't have too much opinion on the mix but I just want to say, that snare is so FUCKING huge!!!love it

I feel the cymbals(overheads could use a lil more sheen and cut some harshness on them)

tom also could EQ to fit better with the snare and kick. now the TOMs a little sounds like in a different kit