Feared mix

[illuminatingsun]

I thought I'd have a go at mixing with the stems from 'Lords Resistance Army' by Feared. I'd appreciate it if anyone could give me some feedback.

I haven't uploaded the whole thing, but here's some of it:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/6036147/Feared Mix.mp3

UPDATED MIX 1: https://dl.dropbox.com/u/6036147/Feared Mix [2].mp3

 

[guitarguru777]

That snare is WAY loud, the overall mix is lacking come clarity, and I think for the style of music there is too much delay ont he choruses

 

[illuminatingsun]

Thanks for the feedback guitarguru777. I've made some changes based on your advice.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/6036147/Feared Mix [2].mp3

 

[guitarguru777]

Snare is still loud, and the mix is still dull. Bring the cymbals down a bit too. What I did to brighten up mine is added a tad of Ozones Exciter to brighten it up in the higher frequencies.