First mix of my new track Ive been working on these past few weeks..

[WJAY]

Alrighty,
This is my very first post upon the 'Heavy Metal Forums'.
I wanted to put this up to just get your general thoughts on the tones, levels etc.
I'm a newbie in all honesty to this recording, mixing business but just am looking for a fair few pointers and tips on how to get a better fuller sound within my mix.
Hope you enjoy.

Heres the track:-
http://soundcloud.com/snorkel-1/magenta

Thanks,