That random back and forth panning near the middle doesn't really sound very good at all in my opinion, not only because it cuts in the middle of notes, but it just sounds odd doing it on something like that without breaks. On the part after that the snare is ducking the entire mix, guitars get burried really bad. The snare is pretty much dominating the entire mix overall. Kick is also making the guitars duck in a couple of places, sounds overcompressed a lot. Guitars sound a bit undergained and thin.