Hardcore/Screamo/Metalcore Church Kids (FULL MIX AND MASTER)

SirKnucklesmd

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Feb 11, 2011
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Orange County
This is my first time posting in some time here, (I nearly forgot my username and shit) but what this is is a group of young pimply christian kids who opted to have me produce their first single. They came to me I'm sure because well... I work out of a garage studio and they were on a teenagers budget. Boring details aside, This is what I came up with a final mix and master. I was the only person involved in making this song the way it is and I actually put a bit of time and effort into this one (much more than what they were paying me for) because I want to use this as an example of my production work. If you heard just the raw tracking and how off time everything was you would shit the bed after hearing this. I may even post a short clip of just the raw tracking so you guys can see HOW FUCKING FAR THIS CAME and HOW MUCH WORK WENT INTO IT!
Any how, I'm always open to negative feedback and that's why i'm posting, it's not too late to make some revisions so get at me with any suggestions you may have and i'll either take it in as constructive criticism or ignore you completely if I think it's dumb. Thanks!!


http://soundcloud.com/dylanjbrock/a-wretch-like-me-the-wretched
 
Sooo.... No comments b/c there's nothing anyone would change on the mix? Or cuz I slammed it too hard during mastering it's not worth the time to critique on my noobish work....
 
Kick is drowned,either is compressor or just sound,I can hear kick 0:07-0:53 and again 2.47-3:19,actually whole drums are little drowned,and mix is to 'sharp'.