how could i improve this mix?

[Jaekae]

would be nice with some tips from someone more experienced

http://www.box.net/shared/q9uivs7den

 

[chonchball]

just for starters, pull the guitars back a little and put a little parallel compression on the drums and see how that treats ya. there's a lot you could do with this, but that's a step in the right direction