Last week I wrote 7 songs that will probably be on my second album (althoug the first one is not finished yet
). But I'm not sure how to accompany them... In general my style is somewhat soft Metal/Alternative Rock stuff with a few piano parts, synth influences etc... I'm gonna post a song here whose sound I'm not sure about, maybe one of you has an idea how it should sound.
Waves
Domson as TIOBS
Sitting on a rock in the ocean of life
A rock that isnt big enough for two
Standing on a hill in the sea of mankind
The salty water is no longer blue
Im within the shore but I dont feel the waves
The sea is drying out, the distance grows
Im looking down on suppressing natures slaves
The part of mine thats oh so high above
The waves are flat, theyre looking straight forward
And cannot see
And on a rock I start to raise my voice and sing
To create a sunny hour
Theres no land within the splendor of prospering spring
And the salt deprives my power
Lying on a bay at the coast of your life
Im near the water but not yet inside
Sitting on a sandbank in the flood of worlds mind
The current is trying to rinse away my pride
I look into the shore, but I dont touch the waves
Waters high and wild, let me escape
The salty water is this forcing currents slave
But I still cannot find a route to take
The waves dont stop and they cannot be tamed
Surrounding me
And on a rock I start to raise my voice and sing
To create a sunny hour
Theres no land within the splendor of prospering spring
And the salt deprives my power
And on an isle I start to raise my voice and scream
To create a friendly hour
Theres no continent within the beams of spring
And the current takes me lower

Waves
Domson as TIOBS
Sitting on a rock in the ocean of life
A rock that isnt big enough for two
Standing on a hill in the sea of mankind
The salty water is no longer blue
Im within the shore but I dont feel the waves
The sea is drying out, the distance grows
Im looking down on suppressing natures slaves
The part of mine thats oh so high above
The waves are flat, theyre looking straight forward
And cannot see
And on a rock I start to raise my voice and sing
To create a sunny hour
Theres no land within the splendor of prospering spring
And the salt deprives my power
Lying on a bay at the coast of your life
Im near the water but not yet inside
Sitting on a sandbank in the flood of worlds mind
The current is trying to rinse away my pride
I look into the shore, but I dont touch the waves
Waters high and wild, let me escape
The salty water is this forcing currents slave
But I still cannot find a route to take
The waves dont stop and they cannot be tamed
Surrounding me
And on a rock I start to raise my voice and sing
To create a sunny hour
Theres no land within the splendor of prospering spring
And the salt deprives my power
And on an isle I start to raise my voice and scream
To create a friendly hour
Theres no continent within the beams of spring
And the current takes me lower