Too modern-sounding for me. Oh man, how can I explain what I just said? I have a tolerance for some similar stuff but it's really on the whole too detached aesthetically from what I enjoy, in terms of metal, which you say this is. Reminds me of City-era SYL with more breaks.
It's not so much that this is alien to me or that I don't understand where it's coming from... I guess modernity isn't my problem at all. It's mechanical battery with people screaming on top, the emotive range of that sort of thing seems limited to me, and what was done in it has already been done. But then again, it's only one track, for all I know you guys cover a wider spectrum elsewhere.
What I can tell you is that it seems very well performed, and I guess non-myspace encodings probably sound pretty awesome too.