This really isn't a rate my mix/tone test, but more a rate my riffs/writing.
I am INCREDIBLY critical of my writing. I think everything I write sounds incredibly childish and noobish and overall don't get stoked to write at all. This leads to me not writing, obviously. Well, I'm in a band with a lot of potential and can really make things happen. They are a bunch of talented guys and know a ton of people.
The bassist and I share the same view in wanting to create music different from the typical breakdown shit. I like Oh Sleeper a lot. I think they are phenomenal writers, but when I try and write and create riffs with that maturity, I just fall flat on my face, creating something that sounds so dull and so fucking boring.
so.
What do you think of this song? I took it and completely re-wrote it from the previous version. You can hear the previous version at www.myspace.com/tonightwedream. I seriously don't know what to do. I am so dissatisfied with myself as a writer and musician that I almost feel like I don't even want to play, not really, I love it way too much to quit, but you know what I mean.
Any tips, ideas, theories, philosophies on song writing are greatly appreciated. Thinking I can't write a decent song really upsets me and ruins my day. everyday. haha.
New Rewrite.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2376100/1.29.10.TWD.Rewrite3.mp3
The transitions are rough. I was writing it piece by piece.
Ps. Yes, I know the tone is awful and the drums are terrible. Please focus. haha
I am INCREDIBLY critical of my writing. I think everything I write sounds incredibly childish and noobish and overall don't get stoked to write at all. This leads to me not writing, obviously. Well, I'm in a band with a lot of potential and can really make things happen. They are a bunch of talented guys and know a ton of people.
The bassist and I share the same view in wanting to create music different from the typical breakdown shit. I like Oh Sleeper a lot. I think they are phenomenal writers, but when I try and write and create riffs with that maturity, I just fall flat on my face, creating something that sounds so dull and so fucking boring.
so.
What do you think of this song? I took it and completely re-wrote it from the previous version. You can hear the previous version at www.myspace.com/tonightwedream. I seriously don't know what to do. I am so dissatisfied with myself as a writer and musician that I almost feel like I don't even want to play, not really, I love it way too much to quit, but you know what I mean.
Any tips, ideas, theories, philosophies on song writing are greatly appreciated. Thinking I can't write a decent song really upsets me and ruins my day. everyday. haha.
New Rewrite.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2376100/1.29.10.TWD.Rewrite3.mp3
The transitions are rough. I was writing it piece by piece.
Ps. Yes, I know the tone is awful and the drums are terrible. Please focus. haha