I'm feeling in a very artistic mood, and would like to share it with you guys

ThrashTillDeath

Blind Bleeding The Blind
Dec 11, 2007
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Windsor, Ontario
I wrote a couple lyrics tonight, along with one I wrote yesterday.
I have three I'd like to share with you.
I wrote the first one yesterday, the other two I wrote within the last two hours

A Fading Dream

Dictator’s of broken dreams ruling the world on assumptions
Rolling over the weak and planting their mental distractions
The Seeds of failure are hatching into a dead-rose in full bloom
As the intelligent are left to wallow in self-induced gloom

So much potential, so much left unsaid
Spouting blood-red pedals, a dream now dead
Question all my logic, all my thoughts
My goals have been uprooted

Such intelligence confined within an insane mind
Yet incapable of making his own decisions
Not capable of comprehending logic
Facing the world with one foot in the grave

Pass down your illnesses and bless me with your ignorance
Crisis of Disorder as Paranoia plagues my soul
You’re the one who holds my future
Yes, you’re the one who knows it all

Venomous lack of intelligence flowing through your veins
Targetting the mind and creating thoughts inane
Contradicting, Conflicting, More harm than help
I’ve fallen prey to another lost dream

High hopes set the stars as the astronomers sail the skies
These are men with dreams, setting out to make the most of life
Mine, they have been crushed over the weight of heavy burdens
For your ignorance will surely be your heaven


Beyond Reality

My dreams speak of a place
War and violence are no more
In the deepest regions of space
Take my hand, let me show you

It’s time to expand your mind
See what we’ve left behind
It’s time to see all there is to see
There’s so much more Beyond Reality

Feel it rising
All physical ties are lost
As the umbilical chord to reality is cut

Your mind is connecting
To the divinity that lies beyond
Open your eyes, so much more for us to see

Witness life in all it’s purity
no love lost, no lies, just honesty
Beyond Reality is where you’ll see
This is where our mind’s were meant to be

Astronomers have dreamt of seeing such things
Yet close themselves off from all possibilities

I want to connect to my guide
The one who watchers over my soul
I want to learn more about this world
Teach me everything I need to know

There’s so much more to know

Soaring through the skies, looking down below
A divine connection with the world around me
The air tastes cleaner than before
Forests below me, unaffected by the likes of war

I want to touch the sun, and gaze the stars
I want to witness it first hand, not from afar
So many things once off limits to me
Are accessible when pushed Beyond Reality

Insomniac

Twisting and turning in the sheets that confine me
The body has shut down, but the mind continues to run
Mass Producing Thoughts, A Slave to the Mind
Unable to terminate it’s functions until it’s too late

Gazing into the night sky as the moon illuminates his thoughts
Gears are turning as his brain will never know peace
The shadows do not disable him, they only fuel his mind
As the thoughts continue to permeate

A mind that never knows rest
It’s driving him insane
Pacing between his thoughts
Makes no difference where he lay
Catatonic Sleep Disorder

Insomniac

The air is still, all is calm under a moonlit sky
In absolute peace, solitude, and silence
A Captivated Mind always Ahead of Time
The Gears are still turning, with eyes open wide

Fireflies flying high to the lullaby of chirping in the night
As I stare up at a starry sky, Questioning my own Mortality
Seems there’s little time to sleep when there’s so much to see
So little time for all the knowledge that I seek

This mind will never know rest
As it’s driving him insane
Pacing between these thoughts
Makes no difference what you say
Catatonic Sleep Disorder

Insomniac

His eyes are growing heavy but the mind does not wish to rest
As the mental faces the physical, it’ll put that man to the test
Battling his own restless mind in the dead of night
He’s losing track of time, and he’s falling behind


Creative criticism is welcome, let me know what you guys think. I greatly appreciate it. Thanks
 
Thrash,

Sounds cool but to be honest I am not a good lyrics/poetry critic. Do you have music to go with them?
Nah, I don't

I'm writing some music now, but I don't think I'll be using it for any of these. When I'm done the song I'm working on, I want to begin writing some music around one of these lyrics and then recording it. I'll post it when I get it done, but I don't know when that'll be, I've been pretty busy with school and such lately so I haven't been able to write too much lately :erk: