Some Lyrics of mine I would Like to Share with You

[Timmeth]

Theories That I Cannot Explicate

Clock starts ticking away…
…Your matter starts to fade

As I see the theory that was you, I envision myself near…
…I see my impression from the silent enigma erase

Clouded with dust in the mind
Affecting the reality that was this shape
Of darkness, and as it held me deep
I can see dark infinity…
…When I close my eyes

As I held onto precious memories, the taint in your photograph
Begins to disintegrate with my touch…
…for I vanish

 

[Don Corleone]

wow. great poem, timmeth. it grabs you right from the beginning: "Clock starts ticking away /Your matter starts to fade" and the way you depict the other person as a "theory" is just perfect. very touching.

"the taint in the photograph" is brilliant, too. i very much like it.

 

[mehdi.i.e.e.e]

i like the anathema tribute line.

 

[Timmeth]

Originally posted by mehdi.i.e.e.e
i like the anathema tribute line.

Hehe...

It's such a great line to put in a poem/song.

 

[Timmeth]

Originally posted by Don Corleone
wow. great poem, timmeth. it grabs you right from the beginning: "Clock starts ticking away /Your matter starts to fade" and the way you depict the other person as a "theory" is just perfect. very touching.

"the taint in the photograph" is brilliant, too. i very much like it.

Thank you for the kind words. It's always nice to have some feedback of this sort.

 

[Don Corleone]

you're welcome. it was a pleasure to read it.