I'm writing a story...

LoveJanne

Firewind=danger XD
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i'm writing a story, who wants to be in it? :)

edit: GUS and BOB, when you find time for coming back on the forum, I HOPE YOU READ THIS (and ENJOY it) :)

edit 2: Λυπαμαι if my story scared you and Bob away!! :cry: just know it's all for fun and none of it will ever happen!
 
well it's got Firewind in it so :) i decided to mention it here

i'm gonna need someone to translate stuff to Greek but with English letters (that make sense?) (my computer doesn't support Greek letters :( )
 
the story starts off with me waking up in the middle of a street in Thessaloniki and just by chance finding the Emerald Cafe with Petros there..
 
:OMG:

Im not the author, you are, we can all see what happens when its finished!

EDIT: Ohhh you are going to write it on here?
 
muaha well i'll decide i was just wondering what you prefered, taking them off or not :p

yeah in fact here's what's done so far, i just started today (is 5am right now but i don't really care)...i need a title.
EDIT: i took Katie's advice and have done some editing.

My feet fumbled for what I expected to be my soft carpeted bedroom floor. Instead, what I felt was so different it was enough to make my heavy eyelids fly up from surprise. I found myself not in my bed, not in my room, not in my home. Instead, I awoke laying on a burningly hot stone street, the sun beaming brightly overhead. I sat up, shielded my eyes, and looked around. “Where the hell am I?” I said aloud. I got up without touching the street. Dusting off my pants and shirt, I continued to look around. The area was totally unfamiliar to me. To be honest, I wasn’t sure if I was even in the same state anymore… The second thing to come from my mouth was “how the hell did I get here? Where is ‘here’ to be exact?” One stranger was kind enough to answer my questions. “You aren’t in Kansas anymore, Dorothy,” he said. “Then where AM I?” His answer hadn’t helped me enough. “Calm down. Ok, you want to know EXACTLY where you are? You’re in Thessaloniki.” That and the stranger was gone into the crowd. I just stood there, jaw agape, eyes watering not from fear but from utter shock. I stood like that for maybe a minute or two. After that, I just turned around and began running, swerving between startled people. I was looking for something. The only place I knew of in the city.

When I found that place by pure luck that I was closeby it, about 10 minutes had passed. I was amazed at myself for having been able to run 10 straight minutes. Panting, drenched in sweat, I pushed open the doors. I was hit with a rush of cooling air. All heads turned to me. Smiling, I just walked toward the counter, occasionally muttering a “yia-sou” (hello) to some people closeby that were staring at me. No one said anything back.

I took a seat towards the end of the bar, where there weren’t so many people. I had my head down, resting it on my folded arms, only to lift it when I heard a glass hit the counter in front of me a moment later. I forced my eyes to meet the eyes of the person that’d put the glass before me. I was amazed to find it was the man himself, the guy that owned the café/bar. I actually couldn’t believe it, but it was him…Petros.
 
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I was quiet for a second, my brain trying to remember how to tell that I didn’t speak much Greek. I really didn’t want to pull out this little slip of paper that had a few phrases written on it in Greek. But, after five minutes of silence, I gave up and bent down like I’d dropped something, but really I was looking at the paper I pulled out when I bent down. When I sat back up, I said to Petros, “Den melo kalaeleneka.” (I don’t speak Greek well). “Fine,” he said back. “So since you aren’t from here then where?” “America.” “Ah. You alone? You seem young to be alone…” “Yeah, actually I’m alone. I can’t remember how I got here.” Petros laughed at that, saying “You’re having that good a time eh?” I almost told him that I woke up in the middle of a street with no fucking clue how I got there, but instead, I said, “You could put it like that” and smiled. “So you want anything?” “Sure…just some Ouzo” Petros stared at me for a long moment, but went and brought the bottle to me, setting it by the glass. I took a quick glance around then poured myself some, the glass half full.
 
more: (i apologize for the long posts!!)

After tending to a few more people at the other end of the bar, Petros came back to me, asking, “How you like it?” Swishing the glass around a little, listening to it fizzle and the ice cubes clink, I replied, “It’s actually good. It made a good first impression to me of Greek beer.” “Good. So, ah, how’d you come to find this place?” Petros was leaning a little to me, his elbows on the bar, face resting on his hands. “Read on the internet you owned a café, and decided that since I was in Thessaloniki I might as well stop by…” He nodded, and I continued, “The other guys around by chance?” Petros smiled and stepped back a bit. He then yelled, “Hey guys!! We got a Fire-fan here! Come over!”

I turned around in my chair to see the rest of Firewind coming my way. When they had come, Petros said, “English.” He was close enough so I pinched his arm. The look on his face got me giggling a bit, and the guys as well. Petros only sighed and looked at the ceiling, grinning.
 
here's more (it's going slow i know, but wait a bit longer for it to really get going):

“Hello to you guys. Yes, I’m a Fire-fan, as Petros said. Fairly new fan, but one none-the-less…” “Are you the one who send me some art by Myspace?” Gus asked. I was stunned he recognized me that clearly, that he remembered at all even. “Y-yeah, that’s me, I’m that person. I could show you if I had a computer right now…” For some reason, we all went silent for a moment or two. “But oh well, you must just take my word for it, Gus,” I sighed. “I will then,” he said . “What’s up with you guys? Surely you don’t want to hear about my boring, ordinary life!” I laughed. Smiles spread from face to face. Mark spoke up with, “We’re just waiting to do a gig.” At this moment, a zillion ideas sprang into my mind. So many in fact, that I couldn’t think on even a single one.

“Really?” was all I could say, and for saying only that, I felt like an idiot. “Yep,” said Bob. I stared up at the ceiling, calming myself. After a few minutes, I looked forward again, saying, “You guys wouldn’t happen to mind if I went along, would you? Or do you not give your fans rides to shows?” I was hoping to God that they would make this one tiny exception for me. Gus turned his head to the side a little, as if he really needed to think it over, as if it were a pretty important choice. Oh, I understood the things that came with a band giving a fan a ride to a show, but I was choosing to ignore them, as I’d never gotten so upclose to any one band I liked, until now that is.

Finally, Gus said, “Ok.” Just that one word. I could’ve died from over excitement and joy, but I settled for instead squeezing my hands into fists so tightly my nails dug in and drew blood in tiny trickles, which slid down my wrists and so on. Seeing that, Petros tossed me a rag. I wasn’t conscious of the blood until I saw Mark’s eyes looking at my fists, which made me look also. Only then did I get what the rag was for. I unclenched my fists and dabbed the blood off. Looking around, wondering what to do with the rag, I tossed it over the counter, landing it in a sink. Good, it needed washing anyway.

“Well now,” I sighed, “how much more time before the gig?” Looking at his watch, Mark said, “Oh, maybe twenty minutes, or a little less. We should leave now, start driving.” “Your guys’ gear is already set up?” I asked. “It is. We don’t need long for setting up, so since because of that, we had much spare time, so we stopped down here, one of few airconditioned places,” Bob explained, laughing a little after the last part. “That’s cool,” I said, “now let’s go.” “No stuff?” said Apollo. I shook my head. “No need for it, really. I’ll be fine without my stuff right now.” So…the six of us said “andeo” (goodbye) and went to the van.
 
yet more:

The van looked like any other ordinary van one might see on any street. Good that the guys knew how to “blend in” with everyone else. Mark was the one driving, Petros sat beside him in the front row. The middle row was taken by myself, Gus, and Apollo. Poor Bob was alone in the back row. Somehow I ended up in the middle spot with Gus on my left and Apollo on my right. It wasn’t the most comfortable feeling, being that I didn’t have much room (Gus was taking up more than a lot of the room, which made me doubt he was still only 75kg…) and Apollo wasn’t entirely on his end of the seat because of Gus.

I made the best of it that I could…I leaned to the left a little, in attempts to get even the slightest bit more comfortable. Gus looked over at me right away, and I paused. He smiled, and I smiled back. Disregarding his stare, I leaned anyway still, resting my cheek on his soft shoulder covered by a mess of dark, uncombed hair. I let out a long sigh and closed my eyes, not having any idea of the length of the drive. Besides, car rides always make me sleepy.
 
thanks :D

(i'm actually :lol: at parts of my own story, how weird! like the part with Gus probably not being 75kg anymore :lol: i just randomly came across a load of info on G, and it listed him at 75kg. i was like "how old is this info?!" would someone not mind finding out for me, please :D )
 
here's more!

After what seemed like ages later, I felt someone nudge me to the side. I grumbled but forced myself up, only to fall flat on my face because my legs had fell asleep. I heard laughter shortly after. Grumbling even more, I held onto the door handle and pulled myself up. Next thing I felt was someone dabbing my bloody nose with a handkerchief. “Efxaristo, whoever did that for me!” “Not a problem.” It had been Mark. I smiled and rubbed the little remaining sleep from my eyes.

We were standing at the back entrance to the gig venue. “Woooow,” I whispered, staring at the gigantic building. “Let’s go!” Gus said and pulled me along by the wrist, like I was a 5-year-old child standing in the middle of the street. The inside of the building was even bigger than the outside appearance. That and it was about 30 degrees cooler inside, and dimly lit. Even though, I could see the outlines of couches, doors, mirrors, trashcans, etc. From the silence, I could hear a distant, familiar sound slowly growing louder with each passing moment. I looked to Apollo. His eyes seemed to know that I knew what that distant sound was. It didn’t take much longer for the sound to become clear to my ears…it was an impatient crowd chanting over and over “Firewind! Firewind! Firewind!”. Grinning wildly, Petros threw one arm around me and the other around Gus, and yelled, “There’s no stop, it’s GOOOOO time!” Thanks to Petros, if he kept that up, I’d go deaf in my right ear before long.