judge this piece of music i'm working on

[Brett]

notes before you listen:

- it's around 2 minutes but my goal is to have it 3 or more minutes.

- it's not metal. at all.

- i plan to include some light, ambient background drums.

- i plan to include some samples later on.

- it's made using Fruity Loops.

- ignore the title. it's not jazz at all.

http://media.putfile.com/jazz1-91

 

[deathstrike from hell]

sounds like it belongs in a japanese rpg for the playstation. hahaha

 

[lad]

Yeah, it's pretty cool. I can kind of envision a half-time, possibly distorted (if you like) snare being the rhythmic pulse, with some open hi-hat and maybe a splash here and there. Those presumably sustained chords in the background, they could be held on to for longer, if you're looking to pan out the length just a bit. Bah, don't listen to me. Carry on.

 

[Liverslapper]

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Akira made something almost identical to that in the Silent Hill 3 Soundtrack. But good work, very creepy, and it reminds me of silent hill, which is a plus.

 

[RedKef]

interesting.

 

[RedKef]

melody preceding you hear : it's about 2 small in return my end impending discover or additional small. it's not materials. at whole. immateriality locomotion by land be the cause of be composed of quantitative state ambient distance repeat. immateriality locomotion by land be the cause of be composed of quantitative conformity subsequent forward. it's made workshop Constant Curvature. be negligent love indication. it's not jazz at whole.

 

[Malergion]

Great, now all I have to do is decrypt that response.