lyrics you wrote

[OfManAndMetal]

I think 90% of metal lyrics suck. Half the bands today just write about death and killing constantly with no attempt at originality. Its quite funny actually.

*eye twitches*...seriously, listen to metallica master of puppets (see lyrics)
or any iron maiden song for that matter.... damn i am at a loss of words after readin' that...

 

[Samuel]

*Holds MTLHEAD_789 back*
Just let it go man, just let it go.... Nah go get 'im.

 

[OfManAndMetal]

*Holds MTLHEAD_789 back*
Just let it go man, just let it go.... Nah go get 'im.

LOL..... this guy obviously doesnt listen to metal... or just choses not to

 

[Black Core]

I think 90% of metal lyrics suck. Half the bands today just write about death and killing constantly with no attempt at originality. Its quite funny actually.

I think you're right, it's all blood this, hate that.
Of course there are exceptions, but still...

 

[ProjectedBlack]

Can anybody post impressions on the lyrics I posted?

 

[evilette]

I think 90% of metal lyrics suck. Half the bands today just write about death and killing constantly with no attempt at originality. Its quite funny actually.

Oh yeah I've done that. Only cos most of the "deep" shit I actually think about just seems cheesy to go on about in lyrics, unless you can come up with some sort of cool metaphors.

Here's an example of the mindless violence lyrics:

Shotgun in hand, blast to the face
Fragments of your skull litter this place
Brains in the air, erratic blood splatter
Thick, putrid stench of your faecal matter

Another one down, she's twelve years of age
So gratifying but I still feel this rage
Straight through the gut, her white blouse in tatters
Foolish of her - to think her life matters

They should have seen it coming
They brought it on themselves
This torture I'm unleashing
Has only yet begun
Cold steel grasped in hand
It's power at my fingertips
Your torment satisfies my need
It's pleasure as you break and bleed

Deathdealer - the only one
Deathdealer - the dealer has won
Deathdealer - fear my name
Death to all in the deathdealer's game

Her punishment due, she falls to her knees
My lust for pain will be appeased
Crack to the skull, blood gushes forth
No mercy for this bitch I'll slaughter the whore

The "they should have seen it coming..." and "Deathdealer" chorus thing parts happen a couple of times each.

Don't worry I wasn't trying to be too originaly jus going for violence really...

 

[evilette]

^^ oh and if anyone was gonna steal em it's too late they're already in use. Soon to be recorded.

 

[Othala]

Can anybody post impressions on the lyrics I posted?

I guess I can do so. I really liked the first one. From The Ashes I believe it was called. The rest didn't really grab my interest too much, at least not as the first one did.

 

[Travisty]

I think 90% of metal lyrics suck. Half the bands today just write about death and killing constantly with no attempt at originality. Its quite funny actually.

I think pantera has some ov the best lyrics, not so much death and killing as much as respect me or get your ass kicked.

 

[Black Core]

I think pantera has some ov the best lyrics, not so much death and killing as much as respect me or get your ass kicked.

they do, don't they
there's actually meaning to their lyrics

 

[Travisty]

was that sarcastic?

 

[Travisty]

shadow games

stand back for the revoloution
regret the berdon of retribution
enforce the right for our destruction
at the knees of domination

await the rhyme of annihilation
wipe down the entire nation
closing in I see our extinction
from the eyes of another creation

shadow games
fooled me again
call my name
when I win
shadow games
cold is my skin
I am not your reason, I have no reason

fall apart from a stail trasfusion
in my head another possesion
knee deeep in sufocation
hide myself for the right occation

stare on to the crucafiction
hold your tongue its an execution
you can't hurt me by rejection
break bones for determenation

shadow games
fooled you again
call your name
when you win
shadow games
cold is your skin
you are not my reason, you have no reason

(this next part is where the song breaks down)

psycho mind games
I feel your presence
primal war games
your prayers disgust me

(and here it picks up)

look apon this battle field/war zone
so dangerus and agonistic I know
pools of blood and fifty years of flesh torn
broken dreams/hostile screams reborn
the hell is shadow games

I was thinking about changing the rhyme scheme, but there it is.

 

[Black Core]

was that sarcastic?

yes it was

 

[Travisty]

thanks for clearing that up

 

[Travisty]

wow dude those are pretty good like slayer almost

 

[Black Core]

That evil part sound familiar

 

[Kasdraven]

Prosthetics R' Us
Intro
Breaking the mold has become the mold.
Struggling for individuality has become the trend.
This is the social hypocrasy spoon fed like shit to the blind cast away.

Verse 1
Cutting. carving, scathing and scratching
Crying, whining, bitching and latching
LATCH - to a goddamn fortified lie
Filled to the seal with a weighted casting die - cheat
It's turned society into a multi-shit melting pot
and bled into a replicant of individual thought
Follow the leader - a national passtime
Turned a superficial gum bleed to a national crime
a world wide rhyme
Everyone different?
A oxymoron like the truth in the lie

Chorus
PUNCTURUING - A syringe that bleeds you thin
PROSTHETICS - The mass suffocation of us all within
Prosthetics R' Us(x4)
PROSTHETICS(x3)

Faced with the truth you become the receding, seething little bitch
Tut, tut, cunt
Breaking down, and stressing out and- WHAT!?
No, fuck you! I don't wanna hear it!
You will not run away or cry!
It does not justify your role in living the lie!

Verse 2
Sift through the broken facade of a diplomacy
FUCKED
Sift through the used and destroyed prosperity
FUCKED
Turning a good thing bad - A randomization method
A contradictory immoral lie that is now self fed
I got a tire iron meant for your slanderous name
A gas can and a match for the cast away fame
How's it feel to be a social distortion?
A bullshit blur conserved, reversed and raped in contortion!

Chorus

Individuality has finally had its asshole collectively fucked
by the millions of pussies unable to find their own individuality.

© Copyright 2006 Lee Tish (Meaning me)

 

[WNxScythe]

The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.

---yes I stole some album titles It's supposed to be about seasonal change/love poem.

 

[Lunatic_Asylum]

The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.

---yes I stole some album titles It's supposed to be about seasonal change/love poem.

Absolutely brilliant, so far the best I've read from that post! You have a talent, please post what you have here, I am and will be grateful.

 

[Teh Grimace]

You can't reference Darkthrone. It's just a bad idea. And especially not more than once in the same song.

Scythe's has been the best so far, but only because everyone else's has been utter shite, while his was just slightly shite.