Mix Critique: Sludge/Doom (Cough/Windhand etc)

[Pman]

I'm mixing some tracks for a sludge outfit i've been drumming with for a while.

Here is one of the tracks, was looking for some general mix critique and some ideas on how to possibly add more dynamics back into the track, specifically around 2:43 where the track slows down.
I want more of a dynamic breakdown, while the track as a whole is fairly flat.

(there ARE vocals on the track, they just dont show up for a while)

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/8740721/wort/2013/wort4.91.mp3

Still some editing on the toms is necessary.

The mix consists of: 2 overheads, kick, snare, 2 toms, 2 guitar tracks, bass and reamped distorted bass, and two different vocal tracks.

 

[Phil Anselmo]

Very nice man! Love this music and sound.

 

[Pman]

Cheers dude, from the mighty Phil Anselmo himself!

Any thoughts on the mix at all? I'm listening back and I think maybe the guitars are being overpowered by the kick, snare, and bass. It's all audible but not particularly enjoyable to listen.

Any opinions on it would be welcome!

 

[Sludgekicker]

Man, i fuckin love it! Maybe your bass and kick is fighting for presence and the dynamics might be a bit flat and pumpy because of this but its still listenable so great job so far.