That verb on the snare is pretty bad man. Reminded me of St Anger when it first came on, just the sort of overtones its adding to the snare. Either that, or you didnt remove that ring in the snare at around 450hz? I seriously subtracted that about 7dB along with the 9dB of low-mids I already took out of it.
I think the guitars are still a little hollow... kinda like that sound with the triple recto on Opeth's Deliverance, except this kind of music pretty much demands more lush and open guitars.
Whole mix together sits pretty well though. I reckon just work on the guitars and the verb and try to get it all sounding a bit more open, and it should be good.
It's funny actually, I've had more comments about my mix coming from other forums, haha. Not a single one here.