modest mouse/nirvana 'ish. any room for improvement?

[Tim HLAH]

not metal i know, but the band is really cool.
any advice for areas i could improve on?

drums are all tracked live, but i blended a kick and snare sample with my recorded sound. toms and ohs are live tracked

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9173449/mixes/outer space may 11.mp3