musical relation

Here's some lyrics I've written. I got a little stuck because I've been in a weird place in my head for a bit, so anyway, tell me what you all think.

When you look to the sky
What god well compell you?
What serenading choir full of lies
An ancient text dictates your fate
You lie and waste your days
Sending prayer to a false savior that awaits

Why? Do you fear life?
Judgement waits on every corner
With it's black soulless grin
Do you taste the seeds of hypocrisy
Or will you forever wander bleeing
Inside the narrow paths of your mind?

Open your arms, renounce your fear
Reality is pain & death & Pleasure all the same
Strip away the bondage of past years
Be the dreamer, drink your sins
Let your own beautiful darkness begin



OK so that's it so far. I play the piano and I'm trying to train my voice to sing death metal. So once I get to Seattle next year, I will be looking to start a band

It's all about the metal baby!!
 
Oh noes.

Tonight the sky will reveal its true self,
sending me the truth through screaming stars.
The reprecussions will char the Heavens
and scorch the earth, leaving only hell.
Nothing I can recognize, no traces
of anything resembling humanity.
Can I call this sacrifice, can this
be some kind of rebirth through
the worst, most atrocious actions?
Let me bow my head and take in
this horror, so sweet and terrifying.
This destruction is not by any hand,
nor by anything but failure.

I call that "Failure's Apex" Isn't it cool?
 
Okay, well.. it's all midi files.. four of'em. All vastly unfinished ideas, some of them only 30 or so seconds long and it's only guitar so far since none of them are finished yet... It's zipped but follow this link if you wanna hear it. Lets see if any of the guitarists on the forum can figure out the tuning in the "Untitled" one. :p :cool:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=181A6DE77FCCA586

Yeah, so it all sucks ass. what of it? :zombie:

Edit: Oh, and it's all powertabbed out if for any reason anyone wants to view it. ;)