My band finally records our COB covers and 2 originals!

i thought there were some nice melodies in there, and definately potential. I agree the vocals were a bit funny sometimes, he needs to put more power in there at least.
you could make some of the rhythms more interesting, and a lot more work is needed on the lead guitars

i think you have some really cool ideas though, in particular fatal menace

as you said you're all 16, and all playing pretty well, so give it time and you'll get better

some advice id give would be to turn the bass right down to no higher than half on the amps, bass is what makes the sound muddy, and drowns out the bass drum, also treble cuts through very well

keep at it and good luck