need some feedback about guitar tone..

[HaydenLM1]

the guitar tone :
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/40566417/riff idea21.mp3

amp is dual recto, cab is a recto 2x12..mic shure sm57..
how can i improve my guitar tone ?

Thanks helpers

 

[HaydenLM1]

please help anyone ?

 

[weimark]

sounds decent. but post a full mix better.