Need some urgent feedback on how my mix sounds

[Septurae]

Hello guys,

I've attempted to mix metalcore/deathcore whatever you want to call it and it turned out like this. This is still a WIP but any help would be appreciated. Need some fresh ears to check it out:

https://soundcloud.com/septuramusic/brutalmetal/s-ksuyI

Thanks in advance

P.S. This is my first attempt at serious mixing instruments etc.