I don't think he's looking for mix advice, it's a finished thing, and now we put finished things in this section as well, even if we're not looking to be "rated" on the mix.
And chrisjamesdude, even though I never mentioned anything about their image, I think the main point is not about how they dress, but that it looks fake as they're trying too hard to get their point across that they are hardcore cause they dress as such but also have a big mushy heart cause their song is very emotional and heartbreaking. Again, I never talked about their looks, just about the song, which I don't like, I honestly feel it's fake and has no real feeling (my opinion and I could be wrong, but my opinion nonetheless) and started no drama over it.
And if you've heard hardcore, there's very little hardcore in that music, while there's a BIG deathcore influence in the whole song.